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Stealth croncicles 2 part 3

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Stealth chronicles 2  part 3

Keith stood there with a unconscious EDI cradled in his arms. He knew this would happen to him and the results. Keith's AI designs had a flaw that his AI's cant take abandonment or sudden death of someone important to them. But he knew this flaw very well and he wasn't worried he just had to wait when EDI woke up. But the bad news is when he had to face him when he woke up.  Keith took him downstairs to his lab and hook him to his laptop to see how he was doing. It was very hard to look into the AI sphere with regular computers and he didn't know much about it so there was nothing he can do but just wait.  Five hours past and EDI started to wake up he saw his father all blurry and out of focus that means his sensors where warming up. "I never thought Ben would pull a stunt like this." Keith said "What was your first clue !" EDI snapped back "I'm sorry I just, how do you humans say it was like hell in my AI sphere I can't explain it but it looked like every thing was falling apart, it was horrible."  " I am just glad I am here back in reality that's all I got to say."  "Well I will take you upstairs and put you on your favorite couch and let you rest in the living room." Keith picked EDI back up and went upstairs to the living room to the couch and sat him down. "Where is Keally?" EDI asked "Oh she is just in her room taking a nap under her giant pile of plushies." EDI just wanted the doctor to be gone he can't hold back crying much longer. He was trying to be a man in this situation. It took only thirty seconds for Keith to get the idea that EDI wanted to be alone and he turn the TV on to the news channel and went up to his room for the night. "How can this happen I feel like I failed Ben, I didn't live up to his expatiations its like, I wasn't human enough." EDI whispered to him self. Then the news on the TV broke in warning mix of a lightning storm and a blizzard. EDI started thinking that very lightning strike that struck him and destroyed the program that kept him from free thinking. He knew what he was thinking and he will do it. He quickly override the program that kept him from flying in the house and he warmed his jets up and he shot right through the wall of the house right past the concrete and steel of the wall like it was nothing! EDI was raceing upward towards the ski towards the electrical storm. faster and faster he climb towards the storm! The faster he climb the colder it got a ice started to form on his wings. "Is this what you want Ben to be more human again or is it to tourcher me?!" EDI screamed. It wasn't long before a he was struck by a lightning bolt that was capable of five thousand volts of electricity. He saw his life flash before his eye's the day he was born the day he met Veronika and the day he went rouge. Then all that went away when he relies he was falling towards the ground and he felt a sharp pain in his chest latter fallowed by his heart exploding causing his chest to burst open! Then not too later he crashed into the ground with such force that it made a small three foot crater! His emergency power kicked in and he had only five minuets before he ran out of power and die.

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Keith woke up from the loud boom he herd. He quickly went down the stairs to discover a hole in the wall. Keally quickly hovered in the living room. "Father what happen where's big brother EDI!" Keith didn't answer he herd earlier a electrical storm was coming and he put the pieces together in his mind. "Keally stay here and I will be back!" Keith quickly put on his coat and quickly went out  the back door. It Didn't take him long to find a plasma glow deep in the woods and when he saw his son it shock him to the core. His jet shape nose was smashed in from busting threw the wall and when he turned him over he saw a big hole in his chest and he saw the shredded burnt remains of his heart. He picked up the batterd and crumpled EDI and rushed to the house the blizzard didn't make it easy but he made it. When he got in the house to his misfortune Keally saw the shape her brother was in. She was so shocked that she started to scream! Keith had no time to calm her down and he ignored Keally and he went down to the lab. He quickly turned the lights on and hooked EDI to a life support generator to keep him alive! EDI's little cockpit shape head was so smash in and crumpled that it took all of Keith's hand strength to pry it open. But he succeeded. Keith had to take EDI's CPU out of the cradle easily and carefully if he took the CPU out too fast the shock could kill him. But he took it and linked the CPU to the life support generator and later Keith picked up a little remote and he pressed the only button that was on the remote. And when he did smoke plumed out of the floor and them rose a cryo chamber with a medium sized teenage boy with blue hair in it. "I was hopeing to give you this on a much happier of circumstances but know is the time!" He opened the cryo chamber and pulled the body out and laid it on a large lab like bed. He lifted the head back and he pressed and small spot on the neck and seconds latter the back of the body's head opened up and Keith was ready to install EDI in his new body. Keally snuck into the lab and was still shock to see EDI's body. But the part that caught her attention was the blue harid teenager on the table and EDI's jet body on the table with a large hole in its chest. "Did somebody shoot my brother!?" "What happen!?" "Is he still alive!?" The question from her where relentless. But Keith delt with them. "Keally there are a lot of things about your brother your not going to understand yet and I can't tell you but I can tell you this." A long time ago your brother didn't have the capability to feel emotions and then lightning struck him and it changed him it changed him into a sentient being." But intell now he must of thought if he got struck again he will become more human." But since his body is so beyond repair I have to break out his android body early." Keith explained "Do I have one?" Keally asked "yes you do and after I get done with EDI I and going to put your CPU into yours." After the conversation was over the preparations where complete. Keith put EDI's CPU inside the back of the body's head and he pressed on the spot on the back of the neck again and the back of the head folded back closed. Keith did one final check and every thing turned out normal and Keith was so grateful that EDI was alive. He turned towards Keally and he said "Ok I got EDI good and ready to go and mine as well get it done and over with and get you into your's." Keally wanted to be excited but in this situation she cant her brother was in a coma and she just wanted to be in her android body as soon as possible. Keith press the button on the remote and smoke plume out of the floor and a cryo tube came out from the floor. The cryo tube had a small teenage girl in it,  the body had red hair with blond highlights in it. Keith made the same preparations and not too soon Keally was in her new body. When Keally woke up she felt extremely tired from the body transfer. "Ok Keally I know you feel very tired". And Keith got out a small flash light from his pocket. "Now follow the light with your eye's. Keally obeyed the request she followed the light back and forth with her new android eye's. "Ok everything checks out I just hope that your brother wakes up soon. "Father I am to tired and I don't' know how to walk or use legs so can you please put me on the bed where my brother is?" " I want to be near him every second intell he wakes up." Keally requested. "Sure sweetheart anything you want." This brought a tear in her father's eye and he picked her up and placed her down and curled her up near her brother. "Ok I am going to turn out the lights and I am going to sleep here tonight so please get as much sleep as you can." It didn't take too long for Keally to go to sleep next to her brother. But Keith remember one thing and he forgot some one. He forgot the new member of the family. He quietly whent up staris and got Mrs. Pogo from Keally room and he went back down to the lab. Mrs. Pogo saw the wreck jet body and the two sleeping androids on the lab bed. "Please don't ask any questions right now." Keith said. The little android puppy was smart enough to under stand and it nodded its head and Keith laid the puppy between EDI and Keally and it went to sleep on the spot. Now for Keith is to go to sleep him self. He sat in the chair and he fell asleep in just five minuetes.


Ending prolog

EDI woke up in the darkness of the lab and he felt weird, like he had arms and hands. He was so tired from the body transfer he barley moved his head to find Mrs. Pogo and a girl next to him. But he was smart enough to know that he is in the last and final stage in to the body progress he now looks like a real human. But it will take a long time for his fragile mind to recover from all the events past these two day's. And he doesn't know if he could trust any one accept his family again. "Well long time no see sleepy head." The female voice scared EDI and he turned his head to find the girl next to him looking at him. "Oh Keally how's the new body?" EDI asked "its like a whole new world and its going to be some time to get use to." Keally responded. "What happen brother?" Keally asked "I don't want to talk about it know but I don't think I can trust humanity ever again." EDI said "Now please Keally no more questions just please hug me right now I need some one by my side now then ever." EDI pleaded "Ok I understand brother." Keally lazily moved her arms to hug her brother and not trying to wake Mrs. Pogo at the same time. When she completed her task they both fell asleep in minuetes. If there father was awake to see this site he would brake down in tears. To see how a bunch of  mechanics and micro chips  to be so human. These
AI's can really have the ability to teach mankind to stop war and unite into one race.

We maybe think that we are gods compare to machines but they can teach us something and all we have to do listen.

The End.                                                          
This is the las part of a request i been asked to do. I believe this is the longest chapter i have ever written. But i hope the ending wasn't poorly written beings i was in a rush.
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MoonRayCZ's avatar
I cried while this. I could never believe Edi would try such a thing like this. He almost got himself kiled because of Ben. But Keith is so loving father to them, he doesn't deserve to be chased like that. Edi is lucky e has his father and sister. Only Kaelly's android body isn't designed like teenager, she is rather 1 years old girl.I hope Laris will visit them.

But this is really great job :) Tahnk yo for writing al this amazing stuff :blowkiss: